What do you guys think. No negative comments please, constructive critisism ok.

 

Spam?

Hahaha, it looks good! Get raised print on it and you'll look like a pro!

 

SPAM!!

 

Owned! Totally beat you!

 

No spam, I'm not trying to sell anything, just get an opinion/suggestion before getting them printed

 

Thanks for the advice vnv. Bump for any other suggestions before I go get them printed

 

I'll give her one last bumpskee

 

the shadow could be a little crisper and a little closer to the text

 

P = phone number
F = fax number
so say it like it should be ( dont abriviate ) and drop the owner thing thats classed as a power trip thing like im the boss and will ad resentment through jelousey which = loss of earning

 

pretty much agree with what vnv & avant said. ditch the "(owner)". It's not needed. comes across as cheesy. Anyone you're doing business with will find out you're the "owner" very shortly, anyway, right? Oh, and, +1 on the shadow. needs to be crisper-er-er