I need your honest opinions on what you think if my idea for my shop name/ sign. I have been bored as hell today in the rain and designed this in Paint(yes, Paint. Lay off I was bored ) Be a cruel as you want, this is my future business and as consumer's I need to know if it's recognizable. The business will obviously be a tuning shop specializing in VW and Audi performance and that is why I chose this as a sign.

The main objective I am looking for is if you can see what it says in the sign. Thanks in advance.

 

umm cant read it.. no clue..

Dont like the look one bit..
my eyes hurt now..

 

Thats understandable. It is supposed to say VAG Racing(That's the tenative name I am going to go with). I was trying to incorperate the VW and Audi insignia into it, not workin so far, I guess. Oh well. Thanks for the input

 

it's def too busy, doesn't look like VAG racing to someone who doesnt know what it's supposed to say. keep trying though, it doesn't happen the first time. my dad after seeing waterfest also wants to start a VW/Audi tuning shop [8D]

 

Well, now that you've told us, yea, I can see it, but it comes across, initially, like a brain teaser.
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You know, this gives me an idea for another pointless thread[sm=type.gif]

 

Here is my second attempt so far. Opinions on this one?

 

how bout making "VAG" like this (crappy Paint rendering) with the left side of the W extending more...i rushed it

 

Def a good idea, I am burnt out on paint anymore today. I will do some more brainstorming tomorrow. Thanks for lookin out

 

It's still too muddled.

Vag Racing is cool, but you need a new font and lose the rings in the words, they aren't helping any. You can find a better way to incorporate the rings into the logo. "Vag Racing" in the right font with the rings just below it would look tight.

 

Yes, the more I look at it, the more I get dizzy, LOL.