An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
#71
03-05-2007, 02:07 PM
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RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
This is my entry. 
If I were in charge at Audi, I would travel to as many cities of the world as possible to foster the growth of community Audi clubs. It would be important for me to give something back to the people who made my auto empire what it is today. With that in mind, I would organize local meetings and bring a variety of cars, from extensively modified vintage to most recent, for everyone to test drive and enjoy. I would arrange for different vendors to be present, who would offer their products at cost, to the very people who have owned and appreciated my automobiles. To create publicity for the event nationwide, each person in attendance would receive a ticket. At the end of the tour, the winning ticket holder would get his or her choice of Audis from the entire line. Enthusiasm is the key to my continued success.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kelly
If I were in charge at Audi, I would travel to as many cities of the world as possible to foster the growth of community Audi clubs. It would be important for me to give something back to the people who made my auto empire what it is today. With that in mind, I would organize local meetings and bring a variety of cars, from extensively modified vintage to most recent, for everyone to test drive and enjoy. I would arrange for different vendors to be present, who would offer their products at cost, to the very people who have owned and appreciated my automobiles. To create publicity for the event nationwide, each person in attendance would receive a ticket. At the end of the tour, the winning ticket holder would get his or her choice of Audis from the entire line. Enthusiasm is the key to my continued success.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kelly
#73
03-05-2007, 02:11 PM
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RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
please say i'm not too late!!!
even if i am, can i still get a grade?
even if i am, can i still get a grade?
#75
03-05-2007, 02:26 PM
RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
ORIGINAL: kelly
This is my entry.
If I were in charge at Audi, I would travel to as many cities of the world as possible to foster the growth of community Audi clubs. It would be important for me to give something back to the people who made my auto empire what it is today. With that in mind, I would organize local meetings and bring a variety of cars, from extensively modified vintage to most recent, for everyone to test drive and enjoy. I would arrange for different vendors to be present, who would offer their products at cost, to the very people who have owned and appreciated my automobiles. To create publicity for the event nationwide, each person in attendance would receive a ticket. At the end of the tour, the winning ticket holder would get his or her choice of Audis from the entire line. Enthusiasm is the key to my continued success.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kelly
This is my entry.
If I were in charge at Audi, I would travel to as many cities of the world as possible to foster the growth of community Audi clubs. It would be important for me to give something back to the people who made my auto empire what it is today. With that in mind, I would organize local meetings and bring a variety of cars, from extensively modified vintage to most recent, for everyone to test drive and enjoy. I would arrange for different vendors to be present, who would offer their products at cost, to the very people who have owned and appreciated my automobiles. To create publicity for the event nationwide, each person in attendance would receive a ticket. At the end of the tour, the winning ticket holder would get his or her choice of Audis from the entire line. Enthusiasm is the key to my continued success.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kelly
#76
03-05-2007, 02:32 PM
RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
haha.... so does it go by who had the highest grade? Or are you getting 2nd opinions before you announce the final decision!
I got 5 mins till this class ends, then i gotta wait all day to see the winner[
]*crys*
I got 5 mins till this class ends, then i gotta wait all day to see the winner[
]*crys*
#77
03-05-2007, 02:53 PM
RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
fluff press release, what do you want its only 150 words.. I should get an A for originality and the fact that its a documented problem.. read through the WSJ..
ORIGINAL: 2k S4
I didn't expect this from a post *****. But very well written. To bad you are lacking content. It's like a fluff press release.
B-
ORIGINAL: JohnnyBravoA4
well im going to bed so here is my entry..
If I were in charge at Audi, *I* would try to diffuse how many people (non Enthusiasts) perceive Audi to be anonymous in the U.S. One of the biggest challenges Audi faces is how it does not get the notice it deserved. Now that VW is merging into the luxury sector, offering more options and higher priced vehicles it has left Audi with an identity crisis. Piech had said VW would be luxury, while Audi would offer sport. To really achieve such a standard it would change the character of the Audi brand that we have all grown to love. Also, with the growing trend of AWD in the industry Audi need to look towards new innovations to set it-self apart like it has in the past. Audi has been the perfect balance between luxury and performance. With that being said its time to reintroduce this reality to the public.
well im going to bed so here is my entry..
If I were in charge at Audi, *I* would try to diffuse how many people (non Enthusiasts) perceive Audi to be anonymous in the U.S. One of the biggest challenges Audi faces is how it does not get the notice it deserved. Now that VW is merging into the luxury sector, offering more options and higher priced vehicles it has left Audi with an identity crisis. Piech had said VW would be luxury, while Audi would offer sport. To really achieve such a standard it would change the character of the Audi brand that we have all grown to love. Also, with the growing trend of AWD in the industry Audi need to look towards new innovations to set it-self apart like it has in the past. Audi has been the perfect balance between luxury and performance. With that being said its time to reintroduce this reality to the public.
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#78
03-05-2007, 03:24 PM
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RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
Kelly, LoL, sorry! While *we* all appreciate your input, you missed eth deadline (I just found a *new* way to misspell "the.").
Nick, what can I say. *I* liked it, but *I* wasn't judging.
Looks liek baconbait got teh highest grade, THIS time...
2K S4, THANKS!!! I owe ya one
The competition was for a sub-box that, apparently, bentframe cudn't WAIT for SOMEONE to slide a 10-incher INTO, for FREE!!! He's such a *****, and not teh post kind!!!
Well, boys and girl, that concluded MARCH's FREE FROM AF contest. We'll see what's up for grabs, at the end of the month, for APRIL's contest... stay tuned.
The winner needs to contact this months sponser, bentframe, to arrange/pay for shipping
Nick, what can I say. *I* liked it, but *I* wasn't judging.
Looks liek baconbait got teh highest grade, THIS time...
2K S4, THANKS!!! I owe ya one
The competition was for a sub-box that, apparently, bentframe cudn't WAIT for SOMEONE to slide a 10-incher INTO, for FREE!!! He's such a *****, and not teh post kind!!!
Well, boys and girl, that concluded MARCH's FREE FROM AF contest. We'll see what's up for grabs, at the end of the month, for APRIL's contest... stay tuned.
The winner needs to contact this months sponser, bentframe, to arrange/pay for shipping
#79
03-05-2007, 04:35 PM
RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
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not that i really care but I underlined the words that i thought were important..
#80
03-05-2007, 07:38 PM
RE: An "unOFFICIAL" AF contest!!!
I feel it needs to be judged by more than one "mind".... But whatever, grats to you baconbaits.
It just seems like he went in there and graded them before I could process what was going on.
It just seems like he went in there and graded them before I could process what was going on.