There is some nice humor hidden in this prose. It is not however what I would call a poem. The meter is at best random, and the flow erratic. You also fall into using mundane phrasing like: "covers my eyes, my ears and fills up my dreams". Challenge yourself to restate these sections with words worthy of the love you want to express. Keep at it.

 

I named my audi Chugga-boom after the car the Ant Hill Mob uses to race in that old Hanah-Barbera cartoon Wacky Races.

 

named mine Gretchen. She is my german mistress. The kind that likes it rough.....shes a dime

 

My wife calls our Gold 98 A4 2.8 Quattro OLD Christine...our 97 Black A4 2.8 Quattro is called NEW Christine...hahahahahahah, CHRISTINE from Stephen King AND the TV show.....

 

I named her Anna. Just fits her nice. Oh and I like the ways she looks from the back.